Camp - Part 11 - Werewolf Richard

Atmoshere? more like payback, I'm pretty sure Richard hasn't forgoten that dress they put him in, so, the best way to get back at them ( other than hurting them ) is to scare the daylights out of them.

Oh, wow, I just noticed those two girls are wearing the same colors only in different setups, one girl has a yellow shirt and red pants and the other a red shirt and yellow pants and thay have the same hair color except one's up in pigtails, imagine that.

Please don't think Iam making fun of you, the art work is kind of simple, but the story writing is Really Great.  And I should know, while I'm good at commentary, I couldn't write a story to save my life ( or anybody's life, for that matter. ).  So believe me I'm not making fun of you.

Payback, atmosphere, or mabye just being bored, howling it up with the wolves - on a similar level like shouting into a phone in a train compartment.
 
I wanted to make those girls twins. That setup is kinda an idea that sprung from that.
 
My storywriting isn't great. It might seem that way, sure, because I do try to think it through, correcting logcal errors before working it into anything, but mostly it is because I keep it short and very simple, avoiding major and some minor hurdles. If I did something with deep emotions or actual character development, any reader's brain would shut down with a "WTF error".

Oh yes, the" identical twin syndrome " whether two boys or two girls, they'd will do what ever it takes to be different from one another, different clothes, different hair styles, hack, even different ways of talking, anything short of plastic surgery, they will do.  I take it you never seen a episode of Patty Duke, Patty play a pair of identical cousins, they look and talk alike but are as different as night and day. I'll let your imagination chew on that one.

In regard to your writing, OK, maybe it's not great, it's still better then some of the crap I've seen on the Internet, and believe you me, there's plenty to go around.